I promise this is the last Rhyming Couplet post I will make this week. (Sometimes not so rhyming).
Not only because it is my third entry in this challenge, limited to three entries, but because I am aware that it is a limited and unsophisticated form of poetry. Well, at least my use of it is, but maybe it's what you do with it.
I have enjoyed the theme very much, although it did take me to some dark places. My juvenile attempts, coupled with the heavy themes is an odd juxtaposition for sure. I intentionally tried to lighten the theme with this one.
I've really enjoyed reading the entries. I love that the community is so encouraging and kind.
I did very poorly at school with creative writing. I have ideas in my head but struggle to spell the simplest of words. I spent most of my time doodling pictures in class instead.
I have included my drawings too, it was how I expressed myself when words evaded me.
Technology has helped me develop strategies to over come my deficit, and helped me build confidence.
A phone on my desk at work where I write paper records means I can easily search a word as I write.
Producing anything that remotely resembles a poem has brought me great satisfaction.
Thanks.
Freedom's Spark
Oppression is found in so many places,
I see it projected from millions of faces.
Hiding within I see something else too,
Out of the sorrow springs something born new.
A hint of a glimmer I see in their eyes,
A beautiful shimmer, no money can buy.
A manifestation of pains that are past,
They also exhibit a repose at last.
After the battle, the struggle, the pain,
These faces have retrieved their life force again.
In the retrieval they discover once more,
A freedom that they took for granted before.
I've arrived in this place after paying life's fee,
It's now that I cherish my life that is free.