Ah, can't believe I missed this last night!
Such great rhythm throughout, and then that rhyming couplet in the fourth stanza is like sweet icing. All your poems have this grungy quality about them which makes them so contemporary, even when you deploy the classic poetic tools. Almost like you're giving us a shrewd wink as you wax lyrical, totally down to earth and self aware.
RE: (EN) A POEM: MAY