Febizle, you old dog, I see you're still trying to pick up the girls with your poetry. :-) Is it working? Girls, if you're reading this ... come on. How hard does a guy have to try before you're impressed?
My man, Febizle ... he's got heart!
BTW, Febizle ... your use of language is definitely getting more sophisticated. That said, I still want my "verse poem" (fixed meter, rhythm and rhyme scheme) and I'm going to keep nagging you until I get it.
OK, back to the Girls. Here's how an old guy (me) does it. Girls, Febizle and I want your feedback. Let's hear what you've got to say.
RE: Wandering Voice