Hello, once again! Antoni, here, aka the Brick, Butch, Blossom, and Buttercup FanFiction Critic and Recommender back with another recommendation starring the Greens and co-starring the Reds. It is called She Ain't You written by SilverTonguedHunter and published on June 18, 2014. It's rated T. It's in English and the genre is Drama/Hurt/Comfort. All the characters here are in their mid-to-late teens.
The Greens have struck again in this fanfic and they have been joined by the Reds. So, let's not waste any time and get on with it, shall we?
Butch, feeling like Buttercup has been inaccessible to him, as she broke up with him, decides to see other girls. However, there is one problem. They do not measure up to Buttercup's brand of femininity, and as a resolve, he dumps his latest fling, while having coffee. The question remains if Butch really wants to rekindle with Buttercup, with Brick's pep talk propelling him to do so. By and large, this story is simple, short, and sweet, as it is a one-shot. It did not need to complicate nor convolute things. However, if you ask me, I would've loved to have a little more development, as to why Butch is the way he is. The scene that really stood out to me was, undoubtedly, Brick's pep talk to Butch, more on him later when I talk about the characters.
As to be expected, it is absolutely lovely to see Brick, Butch, Blossom, and Buttercup in this particular one-shot. Butch serves as our flawed hero who can't stand Buttercup and her indifference towards him. In spite of that, his feelings for her grow and grow, to the point where he is sick and tired of all of these insipid flings with the other girls. Despite everything they do or say to each other, he knows that Buttercup might just be his Mrs. Right, but he is hesitant to think that. Plus, it's also nice that Butch's impulsive nature was intact, making him all the more balanced as a character.
Brick plays his role as the wiser older brother, given that he is in a stable relationship with Blossom. He makes sure that Butch does not do anything foolish or worth regretting. He serves as the only sane man to Butch's impulsivity, which is something I find very endearing.
Blossom only appears in the middle, as she and Brick were having a little session with each other departs to be in her room studying. She does keep her sweetness and diligence intact, but it would've been nice if she had a say on this in terms of her sister, as she has known all her life. I'm very sure she could have given Butch that extra push to go back to Buttercup so that they can rekindle their broken relationship.
Speaking of Buttercup, she appears in the beginning and the end. There is no shadow of a doubt that she kept her brand of sarcasm in the first part, but it would've also been nice if she were given a lot more development.
By and large, the story is well-woven and well-written. However, there was one grammatical I spotted near the ending and that was the phrase "much to her upset", which should have been replaced as "much to her annoyance or displeasure". In spite of that, I spotted no other mistakes.
Overall, this was a rather nice and short Butch/Buttercup-centered fanfic. Even though it could've benefitted from more character development, I still think it's a worthy read if you are a Greens fan. With that said, I give this fanfic an A. Some slight things do need to be fixed up, but otherwise, go read it. You might feel charmed by its simplicity.
Well, that's all for now. Tune in later for a Brick/Blossom-centered fanfic called Wedding Madness, which was written by crazycatmommy. Until then, this is Antoni aka the Brick, Butch, Blossom, and Buttercup FanFiction Critic and Recommender wishing you all a most pleasant day.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10461558/1/She-Ain-t-You