you are a storyteller, but Girl, you better learn how to paragraph. If you check my stories, I indent (make a new paragraph) almost every 3 sentences! Be courteous to your reader - feed them little bits at a time and let me see lots of space in between :) You're a diamond in the rough. Check out Discord channel on here - lots of people there will help you with editing, and your rewards will go up
RE: A BOOK I STARTED ON. PLEASE READ AND LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK❤