Dear Shortsegments,
You write well at times and rushed at times, you appear to be hustling and hurrying to achieve a lot on this platform and by the size of your stake and the intensity of your efforts (huge number of posts) I know you will be successful. But I suggest you slow your pace a bit and polish your work a bit. I have read your posts and I think there is greatness in you, but you appear to be too hurried. Your posts are often just short of great and I think if you took a bit more time to polish, reread, reword, add different picture, or something else you would produce posts, which are truly remarkable.
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