I haven't actually played this game or listened to the score extensively, but the soundtrack does seem kind of "average" from what I've heard. It might be the fact that there were so many composers that the soundtrack feels a bit thematically inconsistent?

Hopefully, those circumstances and that illness improve soon (if they haven't already).

A couple of typos (not that many):
"Kohei Tanaka as mentioned earlier only contribute six pieces" should be "Kohei Tanaka as mentioned earlier only contributeD six pieces"
"regardless of rather it's a synth or a choir" should be "regardless of WHETHER it's a synth or a choir"