Your idea of having a picture of the main character's girlfriend (Nicole) in his wallet is brilliant! I will for sure be adding that. I have done video for fun and professionally for about 20 years; though not a lot in the last 7 years apart from promo vidoes and how to videos for WatchMyBit.com. This is my first screen play, though I have often producec/directed/wrote and starred in my own attempts at comedy... this is probably my best one