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Sooner or later he will channel the energy to others, whether to the same friend, the surrounding animals, the walls of his room, even to his parents.

That energy is not stopped until even the end of the day. Until God pulls it out of where it was created. That is anger! A heat energy that we ourselves never know when and where it comes from, let alone control it. When we have to endure evil energy and release it slowly or instantly. It's just an art. No one will be able to eliminate it. Can only hold it for a while. It also affected how much energy we have received. Some creatures in the category of 'patience' will bring it towards art. The art of managing coals of fire, because in time the energy will be channeled back, either directly or in a subtle way. We may give any judgment according to our knowledge. I also did not force what I knew. Need a deep understanding of this. However, it is not enough to simply collect theories from various references to solve this one problem, immediately.

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Sooner or later he will channel the energy to others, whether to the same friend, the surrounding animals, the walls of his room, even to his parents. That energy is not stopped until even the end of the day. Until God pulls it out of where it was created. That is anger! A heat energy that we ourselves never know when and where it comes from, let alone control it. When we have to endure evil energy and release it slowly or instantly. It's just an art.
No one will be able to eliminate it. Can only hold it for a while. It also affected how much energy we have received. Some creatures in the category of 'patience' will bring it towards art. The art of managing coals of fire, because in time the energy will be channeled back, either directly or in a subtle way. We may give any judgment according to our knowledge. I also did not force what I knew. Need a deep understanding of this. However, it is not enough to simply collect theories from various references to solve this one problem, immediately.
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