Después de mucho tiempo , vuelvo a la literatura amigos de Hive. Estoy muy feliz de volverme a sentir "escritor" pues desde hace como un año y la micronovela apocalíptica que escribí en cuarentena que fue algo que marcó mi vida para siempre como escritor y como ser humano, en primer lugar por el triste momento que estaba pasando por la enfermedad de un familiar y la cuarantena, entre otras cosas que a veces la vida trae.
Así que sin mas alargues, les invito a leer mi micro-cuento corto llamado la "Eterna llorona", un cuento corto que trata del amor, pero en este un amor que por causas como la vanidad se desvanece como el agua entre tus dedos, al igual que el propio tiempo.
Este tema musical en acapella es uno de mis favoritos para cantarlos, si lees la historia es como si fuere parte de ella. Recomendable.
Mariela era una chica muy popular, virgen y codiciada por muchos cortejantes en su ciudad.
La historia es que era tan agraciada, que no faltaba uno que otro que no
se enamore de ella a pesar de ella ser muy exigente pues era una chica
con un gran futuro, es decir como dirían un "buen partido"
y seamos sinceros tenia un cuerpo fenomenal y piernas
y caderas que eran la envidia de cualquier mujer promedio.
Ojala fuera esta una historia con un feliz pero no y lo adelanto un poco ya para no alargar esta historia.
Resulta que el único problema que tenia esta señorita era que era de una familia muy adinerada y ademas era de sangre noble extranjera y que era demasiado vanidosa a causa de los chicos que la perseguían como perros en celo y eso afecto a la larga en todo sentido. Si me entienden.
En estos tiempos de los años pasados que ya nadie recuerda , tener un buen apellido era algo que importaba y la gente tenia en cuenta.
Incluso los mas abuelos te preguntaban ¡DE QUIEN ERES HIJO TU?
Debido a que en Bolivia , las ciudades y pueblos eran muy poco poblados
y todos se conocen entre todos te daba una ( al menos vaga referencia ) de
con quien estabas hablando.
Mariela buscaba novios...y ellos la buscaban a ella, la verdad
es que era muy exigente al ser de familia noble de la Colonia del Sur pero los padres la sobreprotegian tanto que
terminaba sin salir con nadie, ella quería un chico rico y apuesto no quiera, sus estándares eran altos pues tenia afinidad por fenotipos europeos, prefería y dedicarse a su carrera que no le gustaba en realidad, pero era su plan B al no conseguir a ningún esposo al final y ser auto suficiente, cosa que logro finalmente por cierto.
Soñaba a veces con ese príncipe azul que la sacara de ese espiral sin fin, rezaba al cielo pues no tenia a quien quien contarle sus penas, pasaba las noches sola y llorando cada noche.
Ella se pasaba los años pensando en si alguna vez iba a tener hijos
y formar alguna familia.
Los años siguieron pasando y la situación no mejoraba, hasta que conoció a un galán
que
si que la conquisto y con quien incluso tuvo una relación romántica intensa,
que incluso la hizo convertirse realmente en una verdadera mujer.
Era un hombre de su facultad que conoció en una clase y
ella francamente ya estaba por salir profesional y ya después de acostumbrarse toda una vida
de soledad y lagrimas, esta era su ultimo chance pues al reconocer
el joven la sobre protección de sus padres
y de los líos que iba a tener de solamente cortejarla,
sin ni siquiera tener intensiones serias de casarse ni nada parecido, el joden le planteo
a su amada
me voy a otro país pues BOLIVIA la verdad es que no hay un trabajo muy remunerado y
siendo profesional me seria conveniente irme a vivir a Argentina o Chile,
creo que ya estamos grandecitos para tomar una decisión de esa magnitud
y te propongo que dejes a tus padres y te vengas conmigo.
Al oir estas palabras Mariela se quedo muda y con los ojos abiertos, era lo que siempre estuvo pidiendo
a los cielos, un galan valiente que la saque de ese infierno de vida.
Pero...
Ella dijo no.
Rompió ese corazón en mi pedazos que la maldijo, una de las cosas que ella no sabia era que el era un ocultista aprendiz ( incluso estudiaba magia negra infernal en sus ratos libres) y le miro a los ojos diciéndole maldita condenada te iba a dar todo,
pues el sabia toda la situación, espero que te quedes sola toda tu vida
y mueras sola porque yo se que esto lo haces con maldad y para ser
sinceros había algo de ello, pues sus estándares eran dignos de un narcisista, error pues la soberbia nunca termina bien y todos lo sabemos
El tenia el boleto comprado, tenia el
dinero ahorrado y no contaba con dicha respuesta. Mariela jugaba con fuego y
no sabia que se iba a quemar.
Ella tomo una muy severa decisión entre el amor "romántico" de un hombre
y el amor de una familia.
Ella decidió decir NO al futuro incierto fuera de su país con un buen sujeto o ser
una persona con una familia que la respalde y con un apego enfermizo a sobre todo su
padre sobre protector que
solo buscaba lo mejor para su hija. Ambos se necesitaban, pues según los psicólogos existe un fenómeno llamado codependencia tóxica.
Lloraba un mar de lagrimas pensando en el que tal si, que tal no....y que tal si salia todo bien
y tenia una familia?
Lloraba todas las noches por ese amor inexistente. Su amor casi platónico
como los discos de las época dorada de las baladas románticas
Sola, los años pasaban y poco después su padre muere de un cáncer fulminante.
Quedándose sola regando sus plantas, cuidando de un perro, peces, porque ese amor
de madre lo va a transferir siempre.
Algunas veces aconseja a los jóvenes solteros, que se escojan cualquier pareja antes de que se pase la hora, antes de que se vaya el tren, aunque sea cualquier persona pero que te
deje un retoñito, un hijito en este mundo.
Un retoño que a ella se le fue negado por el destino pero también por ella misma,
pues al decirle NO al amor este se ofendió tanto que jamas volvió.
Y la maldición ni siquiera el mismo cupido en años y años pudo romper, hoy en día
hay días en los que la Señora reclama a su padre a su ya fallecido padre diciendo:
¡Ya ves? entre lagrimas.
¿AHORA YA VES?
Él ya no la escucha pero ella le seguirá recriminando el resto de la corta vida que le queda.
¿Si le dices no al amor, por cualquier razón, estas condenándote?
FIN
Catarsis
La vida trata de tomar caminos y asumirlos. ¡Cuál crees que sea la moraleja de esta historia?
Personalmente estoy soltero, este tema me llega mucho pues me partieron el corazón mucho que ya me cuesta confiar y a veces tiendo a cerrarme y también me siento vulnerable ante ciertas situaciones. Me siento bien como estoy por el momento soltero pero me gustaría que en el futuro no me pase lo que le pasó al personaje del cuento morir en la soledad es algo tan triste que de solo imaginármelo me da cae una lagrima, me gustaría mucho formar una familia pero con tantos problemas en mi vida diaria y encima la pandemia que lo viene a complicar todo para conocer gente nueva , pues se ve muy difícil todo en general (ese fue mi rant del día de hoy , disculpas las molestias)
Gracias por leer hasta el final, te invito a dejar un comentario y si tienes algún consejo para mi sobre como escribir pues es muy bienvenido.
After a long time, I return to literature, friends of Hive. I am very happy to feel like a "writer" again, since about a year ago and the apocalyptic short story I wrote in quarantine was something that marked my life forever as a writer and as a human being, first of all because of the sad moment I was going through due to the illness of a family member and the quarantine, among other things that life sometimes brings.
So without further ado, I invite you to read my micro-short story called "Eterna llorona", a short story that deals with love, but in this case a love that for reasons such as vanity vanishes like water between your fingers, like time itself.
This musical theme in acapella is one of my favorites to sing, if you read the story it is as if you were part of it. Recommended.
Mariela was a very popular girl, a virgin and coveted by many wooers in her town.
The story is that she was so graceful, that there wasn't a single person who didn't fall in love with her, despite
fall in love with her in spite of her being very demanding because she was a girl with a great future, that is to say, as a girl with a great future.
with a great future, that is to say as they would say a "good catch", and let's face it, she had a great
and let's be honest, she had a phenomenal body and legs and hips
and hips that were the envy of any average woman.
I wish this was a story with a happy ending but no, and I'll fast forward a bit so as not to drag this story out.
It turns out that the only problem this lady had was that she was from a very wealthy family and was of noble foreign blood and she was too vain because of the boys who chased her like dogs in heat and that affected her in the long run in every way. If you know what I mean.
In these times of the past that nobody remembers anymore, having a good last name was something that mattered and people took into account.
Even the grandparents used to ask you "Whose son are you?
Because in Bolivia, the cities and towns were very sparsely populated and everyone knew each other.
and everyone knew each other, it gave you a (at least vague) reference of who you were talking to.
who you were talking to.
Mariela was looking for boyfriends...and they were looking for her.
she was very demanding being from a noble family from the Colonia del Sur but her parents overprotected her so much that she ended up
She wanted a rich and handsome guy she didn't want, her standards were high because she had an affinity for European phenotypes, she preferred to devote herself to her career which she didn't really like, but it was her plan B when she didn't get a husband in the end and be self sufficient, which she finally achieved by the way.
Sometimes she dreamed of that Prince Charming who would take her out of this endless spiral, she prayed to heaven because she had no one to tell her sorrows to, she spent the nights alone and crying every night.
She spent the years thinking about whether she would ever have children
and start a family.
The years went by and the situation did not improve, until she met a handsome guy
who
who won her over and with whom she even had an intense romantic relationship,
that even made her become a real woman.
He was a man from her college that she met in a class, and she was
and frankly she was about to go out professionally and after getting used to a lifetime of loneliness and tears, this
of loneliness and tears, this was her last chance, as the young man recognized the overprotection
the young man recognized the overprotection of his parents
and the trouble he was going to have just courting her,
without even having serious intentions of getting married or anything like that, the fucker asked his beloved to marry him.
to his beloved
I'm going to another country because BOLIVIA the truth is that there is not a very remunerated job and
I am a professional and it would be convenient for me to go to live in Argentina or Chile,
I think that we are too old to make a decision of that magnitude and I propose you to leave your
and I propose you to leave your parents and come with me.
When Mariela heard these words, she was speechless and with her eyes open, it was what she had always been asking
to the heavens, a brave man to take her out of that hell of a life.
But...
She said no.
He broke that heart in my pieces that cursed her, one of the things she didn't know was that he was an apprentice occultist (he even studied infernal black magic in his spare time) and he looked her in the eyes telling her damn damned damned I was going to give you everything,
I hope you stay alone all your life and die alone because I know you will die alone.
and die alone because I know that you do this with malice and to be honest there was some of it, because
I hope you stay alone all your life and die alone because I know you are doing this with malice, and to be honest there was something of that, because his standards were worthy of a narcissist, a mistake because pride never ends well and we all know it.
He had the ticket bought, he had the money saved up
money saved and did not count on such an answer. Mariela was playing with fire and
she didn't know she was going to get burned.
She made a very tough decision between the "romantic" love of a man and the love of a family.
and the love of a family.
She decided to say NO to an uncertain future outside her country with a good guy or to be a person with a family to back her up.
a person with a family to support her and with an unhealthy attachment to her overprotective father who
overprotective father who
only wanted the best for his daughter.
They both needed each other, because according to psychologists there is a phenomenon called toxic codependency.
I cried a sea of tears thinking about what if, what if, what if not .... and what if everything turned out well
and I had a family?
I cried every night for that non-existent love. His almost platonic love
like the records of the golden age of romantic ballads.
Alone, the years passed and soon after her father died of a fulminating cancer.
She was left alone, watering her plants, taking care of a dog, fish, because she would always transfer her mother's love
mother's love will always be transferred to her.
Sometimes she advises young singles to choose any partner before the time is up, before the train leaves, even if it is anyone, but who will leave you a child, a son, a daughter or a daughterless child.
a little sprout, a little child in this world.
A sprout that she was denied by destiny but also by herself,
because when she said NO to love it was so offended that it never came back.
And the curse not even the same cupid in years and years could break, nowadays
there are days in which the Lady claims her father to her already deceased father saying:
Ya ves? between tears.
NOW YOU SEE?
He no longer listens to her but she will continue to reproach him for the rest of the short life she has left.
If you say no to love, for whatever reason, you are condemning yourself?
END
Catharsis
Life is about taking paths and coming to terms with them. What do you think the moral of this story is?
Personally I'm single, this topic is very close to my heart because I've been so heartbroken that it's hard for me to trust and sometimes I tend to close myself off and I also feel vulnerable in certain situations. I feel good as I am single for the moment but I would like that in the future I don't have to go through what happened to the character in the story, to die in loneliness is something so sad that just imagining it makes me cry, I would really like to start a family but with so many problems in my daily life and on top of the pandemic that comes to complicate everything to meet new people, it seems very difficult everything in general (that was my rant today, sorry for the inconvenience).
Thanks for reading to the end, I invite you to leave a comment and if you have any advice for me on how to write it is very welcome.
I know English but I decided to give a try to thi Deepl. If you see a mistaje please let me know. THanks. Im new at this. Because I only writing in spanish in the past, and I still need some time to figure things out so. You know...
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