Hey there Hive account@izziqbal, it's a shame you couldn't get your wallet back.
Yeah for me at last I found the post a little on the long side, it could have been better (for me at least) if the story was divided in two posts or just summarized a little more.
I have to agree with Hive account@leoblaze regarding the format, I'm also using my phone and find it hard to appreciate the art. Vertical panes are really the way to go here, even more if you're doing a comic strip. But still the art is solid, I liked it.