Assuming your main content is the article, it's above average length? Might be just me who prefer quick short info, but i think you can shorten the writing just a lil bit more.
The comic strips are way too small & crampy? I'm viewing this on phone, not sure if its any different when viewed on pc. Perhap reduce panel amount or arrange it vertically.
Btw, my condolences to your wallet ='(
RE: My Sleepless Nights #Episode 2: To Capture the Sun