MUCH better, we are almost there, try thickening the lines on the plane just a little more, the problem is that the disparity between the thickness of the lettering and the thin outline of the plane is not cohesive to the overall composition. Man you are soo close!

FAT IS FUNKY!

We are going to make the original steemjet logo funkier here.

think image enhancement, exaggeration, thanks !

and fill in the white spot by the right tail rudder!