If you want honest feedback, I'll give it, but I warn you that you won't like it. Anyone with a brain is going to click on two links when they arrive at SteemIt: Trending and Hot. Those two links will damn your presentation. If they click Promoted, they will fall out of their chair and laugh at the entire concept.
Take right now as a simulation for this: under Trending some of the posts are absolute nonsense - one post which received $400+ is advertising a product and nothing else - NO INFORMATION WHATSOEVER. Why does a whale think that makes a good post?
Most of the posts are about SteemIt. Do you know how lame that is? Where are the posts that show how SteemIt is providing unique information a person couldn't get off Reddit, Facebook or Twitter. Imagine if the most popular posts on Facebook were all about Facebook. You'll use the excuse, "SteemIt is in Beta" and again, any investor is going to realize that SteemIt has been in beta since its existence. This is not a software product that has ever matured and never will.
SteemIt, like bitcoin, reflects what can be and that's all it ever will be. Bitcoin has been around for 10 years, yet can't get jack-squat straight. SteemIt has been around for 2 years and is a bigger joke the more time passes.
Investors will ignore all the other information you wrote because those are the only things that matter to them. Twitter and Facebook were much more mature after 2 years and they weren't trying to get investors as early as SteemIt has been begging for.
So there it is. Your slides have good information, but you're not addressing the CLEAR elephant in the room, which boils down to this simple point: SteemIt is an absolutely abysmal social network compared to Twitter, Facebook and Reddit. Considering this, why would anyone invest in SteemIt?
RE: Steem Investor "Pitch Deck" Presentation (Feedback Requested)