Thank you for your suggestion. I think I'll take it.
You know, in a way, I don't feel "pain", in the sense that I don't feel like I deserved to have made it big with this anyway. I mean, even if I had better presentation, ultimately it's really Fred Wilson's post that is valuable, not what I'm doing.
But I do feel a bit of a shame... being a long time Fred Wilson fan, I was super excited to share this. But this is my lowest quality post. In my opinion, my other posts (particularly the most recent one) is much, much better. I'm also trying to write a fictional story. It would've been nice if I had been able to get some readers of my content through this... that's what I really feel like is a pity. Ah well.
RE: Famous Venture Capitalist Fred Wilson talks about Steem