Lovely poem... Great use of rhyme, timing and metaphors. Enjoyed the read. A periodic twinkle of greatness. Like what you did at the beginning. Brilliant.
Your last but one stanza seemed incomplete and short though. Big ups...
Finish hard!!
Lovely poem... Great use of rhyme, timing and metaphors. Enjoyed the read. A periodic twinkle of greatness. Like what you did at the beginning. Brilliant.
Your last but one stanza seemed incomplete and short though. Big ups...
Finish hard!!
RE: "100 day Poetry Challenge [Day 90]" - Poetry -Oh Mademoiselle