You are correct about this!

You should split it into 2 pages and I will pay you 200 upvotes each or 400 total, and I will send you 200 liquid steem for both (probably monday).

split the words just like you did

"And when the farmers saw this,"

"they came and got their own SMT" (his face is on the coin, fantastic)

So keep this 2-page format going, "And when the whatever people saw it, they came and got their own SMT"
spectacular graphics again by the way!

This part of the story is the Walton Chain or supply chain blockchain application that we will see soon.

I think we should ask the community what else we could add here that would be timely, effective, and/or cool (blockchain applications).

I forgot what other examples I used at the end of this story. Maybe we could come up with some better ideas.

Blockchain certified food is the big application.

Blockchain certified Louis Vuitton:

"And when the clothing designers saw this, they came and got their own SMT"

medicine

"And when the drug companies saw this, they came and got their own SMT"

brainstorm, what else (markets) is "blockchain certified" going to revolutionize.

Voting machines (robots)

And when the voting machines saw this, they came and got their own SMT's

(that last one would be pretty challenging, because robot voting machines do not yet exist, but who cares, because if the reader made it this far, then blockchain certified political voting would be the ULTIMATE example of blockchain changing our world for the better (what do you say, can you give THAT one a shot?)

And I really like the clothing designer and drug company one too (that one would be hard too I know).

Let me know, because this is the ultimate teaching time (smart blockchain apps). The further we can push the boundaries here, the better. Maybe we can put several examples together and cut out what don't work, but I will pay for pages even if we don't use them.

This is the time to TEACH!