Hive account@abazzbdx, you need to compel your readers not only by the content but by the structuring of your article. In fact the structure is what people consider first.

Structuring includes, spacing paragraphs, use of subheadings and using related pictures.

So, you should go and perfect your formating and styling as that's the only way you can be considered by SteemSTEM.

You should also reference your sources and cite all your images.

Read this guidelines for more aid.