Best Blog (05/08/18) 9th Editon
"A mother's love is incomparable"
Our Best Blog for 9th Editon
Title : Thank you MAMA
Author:
Link: https://steemit.com/teardrop/@yo-mikhael/thank-you-mama
Format:
The format of this blog is so neat. Using a collage maker to arrange the photo made the blog organized with equal partition of the photos and the write-up. The paragraphs are intricately arranged. We can only suggest that instead of using all capital letters in highlighting a word the author can use the formatting guide in making a word bold or bold and italized. All in all the format is appealing to the eye.
Rate: 90
Content
Ok, let us start with the title. The title is nice but we can suggest a much fitter title like: "My last Summer with Mama" or "Our Last Get Together with My Late Mom". Well, again this is just a suggestion. Reading the article, it is well sequenced. The words chosen are clear giving a mental picture as you read it which is a sign of a good write up when you cause a mental picture to the reader of what he/she is reading.
We really like the message of the story most especially attuned to the coming event, Mother's Day. The author is a good storyteller.
Rate: 85
Steemit
Thank you MAMA — Steemit
Hello fellow STEEMIANS! Since its summer time in the Philippines and mothers' day is coming, I just remember the last… by yo-mikhael
Pictures
The pictures are awesome. It is well juxtaposed with the story making a good reference with the write-ups. Again, the use of the collage maker made the entire blog so neat and appealing. The pictures are clear and sharp. It depicts what has happened in the content. The pictures are well dispensed as well. Mainly, the photos give a good visual aid.
Rate: 85
We hope we can see an improvement to the authors next article after this one. He can use a style guide in making an emphasis to a word/s and use the style guide also for a diverse format for his upcoming blogs.
Before we end, let us share to you a quote from the author himself:
I hope that all sons and daughters who can rlovedthis article will realize how short life is. Therefore, seize every moment with your love ones. Hug them, kiss them and tell them how much you love and how happy you are to have them in your life. Maybe you will ask “why”? Simply for the reason that “we must do it; while we still can”. Because when death called them, there is nothing we can do. Even if how many “I love Yous” we say, they can never hear it. Even we give them the most precious flowers, they cannot appreciate it. So be thankful for everyday life. Every morning is another opportunity to appreciate God’s amazing world.
This initiative is made to expose a good epitome of a quality blog from a novice steemian for further enhancement and to inspire others.
