This story is expertly written. Simple construction. you are right to feel that way, but i think being immersed in a story goes beyond grammar sometimes, but choosing to enjoy it. When that is your focus, and more so reading your favorite authors, you'll see words you thought are big decompose and connects themselves in a shapely fashion.
RE: ADSactly Contest - SteemShort #3 - Post 4: Request for an Illustration and the Title of the Story