Your prose is so polished, so packed with information, so intelligent - and yet so readable and engaging! Truly you are a master! And this--this!!!
The Old Ones were here first, before light, before the universe, they lay sleeping in the darkness. Then the hateful light was born and they could not bear it so they fled to the beyond and found it to their liking. But, they always hunger to return, for this universe is rightfully theirs.
WOW
There's a launching pad for a whole novel! An entire series!