Please don't take offense at this.

Your post is too short for the payout.

Your story is VERY interesting and users will read it all the way through if it were twice as long as this. I wanted to say this earlier for another post of yours that was too short, but thought the better of it. I wanted to read more of your posts to see if it would be a pattern.

I enjoy what you write, just wish it didn't feel like a 3 panel cartoon and was more like a short story.

Thanks and don't take this as a slight; it's truly meant to be constructive criticism.

Cheers