You have a minor misspelling in the following sentence:
It came to pass on august 8,when my and i were on our way to the market to get some food stuffs, after crossing the to the next junction, we saw a big truck carrying loads of gifts and valuables,my brother and i looked at it with great amazment, but to our greatest suprise the truck fell down with a loud boom and all the things inside it were scartterd on the road.It should be surprise instead of suprise.
RE: A NEW ADVENTURE STORY.