Yo, Hive account@rjd. This is a solid story and post. I really like the emotions that come into play here. I'm not sure if you had a real life reference or if it's purely fiction but the despair resonated to me as a reader.

And as always, you got good formatting and structuring skills. Pro blogger, man. Awesome job. I just wish we could read more of your works often haha. Cheers.