i haven't stopped reading yet so you have hooked me by installment 3. it would be easier for us Steemit beginners if you had a link to the next installment on each one. I had to go to your blog to find this one. Maybe you did that on purpose? :) shrewd!

So far, i have not detected any vulgarity. Can you please tell me if you use it elsewhere in your novels? i know it adds authenticity but i hate that about our society: that people are seemingly incapable of expressing strong emotions without stooping to common vulgarity and profanity.