It is a flowing story. I admire how well you narrate it, although i get the feeling after reading it, that it is somewhat incomplete...and lack that climax i was expecting. Is there a continuation? I also feel like it does not follow from the story title.
Otherwise you write well.
Meanwhile, i curate for the , a group that manually scouts and supports newbies like you and me. I recommend you follow the
account to join this community an grow.
RE: Broken Dreams