Incredible chapter, . So they are plotting against Orlon? I had my suspicions and now they have been confirmed. What is Emerald going to do next? Are they a couple or something? You have opened up with an absolute blinder of an opener. I've so completely hooked already. I just hope I am strapped in for a long ride. Amazing writing and characterisation, just amazing,
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RE: Hellbent - Chapter 4 (My Original Novella)