Whoa! Awesome job yet again, Hive account@ezzy. A master of so many arts of writing. This is really eerie stuff! You set the scene very well as just a few kids larking about until something sinister is about to happen. I'm not sure what it is yet but I'm very intrigued to find out. Look forward to the next part soon. Hope you don't mind me asking where is the next part to Hellbent? I been waiting too long, lol.