Cranking up the tension, ! Your writing is off the charts. I love the way you describe everything, set the pacing, build up tension and the characters in your story. Things are about to go mental, I can just feel it. Really, you should consider releasing your work. Can't you see it's way up there? Lol. But honestly, excellent work. Cannot wait for the next part (and Hellbent, hint hint).
RE: Hollowed Be Thy Name - Part 3 (A Halloween's Tale)