Hello 
Wow! just Wow
I am in awe
It's like we are in sync. you know this movie right. Pacific Rim. The Jaeger pilots neural bridge thing.
yeah lol
Every step of the story was awesome. Kept me in the zone. Dang! i totally zoned in on this. I felt the story physically.
Saw what you did with the door thing. You pulled it off brilliantly. Hope it wasn't too tasking hahaha
this story is what I call true art
the transitioning shows your level of adroitness to pull this of.
BRAVO
This is full of energy, suspense and thrill.
"you name it"
I may consider to drop some contributions later on. but for now
I am lovin it
Cheers
RE: The story in series: Chapter Two