Nice post. Overwhelming, but very interesting. As I told you before, you might be better off splitting the material. People have a short attention span.
Another suggestion: Music tends to pull in upvotes. Set the tone by putting the YouTube video FIRST in your post and set it apart with a horizontal rule. You can headline it with "Tune of the Day" or "Soundtrack for Today's Post". Try, this might be just the ticket for you! Don't bury your music under all the other material.
Best of luck - Folker
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