I like your story ! That's true India look so appealing, to satisfy curiosity, this country is so singular ! I never been there, I wish I will have a sense of this country with your future post !

Regarding the story, i like the end with the pic of your balconnee, and the way you introduce it to, making people discover you're from Paris, and not Ireland. It's cool, and appealing, however the middle part with those details on the airport stuff, it's too casual in my opinion. Try to to tell an anecdote about, something funny, that don't happen every day. Or highlight your own discovery of travelling. You need a better angle for this part.

How do you deal with safety while travelling ? I wait a bit to travel in India because, I want to be ready for it. I'm curious about this point of your trip :) I have written an article with the way I use to protect me, my belongings and my data while travelling, maybe it can help you :) https://steemit.com/travel/@laazarus/7-steps-ways-to-travel-like-jason-bourne