hey! That's a pretty awesome post, are you posting from the mountains now?
If you'd spend a little more time editing this you could have a few winners on your hand.
I'm hesitant to make unwelcomed suggestions but....

1. you need to chose less photos, all are great but a focus on photos that move forward the story is better.

2. use some bold/italics

3. leave more space between photos and text [ use " < br > " ]

4. center photos!!

https://steemit.com/steemit/@razvanelulmarin/help-me-upvote-you

Other than that, I think this is amazing...the views are sensational.