Man that must have been some mobydick if 20 men were needed to kill it :) Greenish blood also doesn't sound friendly either hah :D
The description of releasing the fish into a pond and it becoming a monster in the couple of moments sounds kinda scary. Brave Willie :)
Hope you've got approved even as this was after the deadline hah :D and if not, well then enjoy the nice upvotes at least :)
RE: Monster Fish-A Twentyfourhour Short Story.