Thank you Hive account@lordneroo

That said, there were issues of style and proofreading. Regardless, you did a good job, and I appreciate the effort you put into your work. I look forward to your next contribution.

Can you give me some examples or improvements what I can do better next time?

I always try to do this as well as possible and I want to get better at writing. Especially when it comes to English. :-)