I try to write a fiction story
I hope all of you like my story,im sorry if there is mistake word because my english is not good enough
Please comment to improve my writing
Losing a loved one forever most clearly left deep sorrow. Continuing to live without him/her in the side is going to be a struggle that is not easy.
Anthony has just experienced something that left a very deep sorrow. as usual he and his girlfriend Jeny going into the workplace. Has become routine for them both to go to work together every morning. However, who would have thought that terrible incident happened to them that day.
That morning, a motorcycle driven Anthony hit by a car. The accident made he was knocked unconscious. When he realized he was in the ambulance. With conditions still confused and in pain, he was worried about jeny. When asked the medical officer, he told that his girlfriend was trying to be saved.
However, when Anthony arrived at Hospital, a police officer told he that jeny had died. The news obviously made he shock. He repeatedly cried and it was hard for him to accept the news of the departure of his lover forever.
"Why did that car hit us from behind? We both experienced the accident. Why did not she take me along as well?" Anthony poured out his heart.
The accident occurred around 8 am, the distance is only 1 km from the Jeny workplace. The driver of the car that caused the accident had fled. But finally arrested. Apparently the driver was still 17 years old and do not have a license. It is dangerous if a person who has not had a driver's license to drive a car alone. The consequences could be fatal as this accident.
Jeny's departure forever make he despair. "I will overcome all these trials one by one. She's gone, who knows what else I can do," he said.
A month after the accident Anthony meet his girlfriend in his dream, Jeny told he to let her go and move on to continue his life
fill everyday with smile and gain a happiness one more time
Anthony wake up and tear come out from his eyes, "I promise i will gain my smile again and i never forget you, you are the best gift that god give to me" he said.