Ahhhhh, Moby.

A trifle heavy on the adjectives.

You are the first person to say anything critical. Thanks! I think I drove home the loneliness part a little hard, re-re-re-iterated a bit too much.

Looks like your bending towards writing in a fiction style to tell your story.

This is something I started in 2020, a storyline I've had in my head for over ten years. Different from the other piece I'm struggling to create writing , although there are a lot of aspects of Lacy's character that are built off my own life experiences.