Butch indeed seems to be a little bit harsh but he just tries to save his crew. I like his plan and that he has thought about having a cover as well. Well done. It's been interesting to read their discussion. And now I'm worried what will happen with them. I don't think that the old guy will be particularly friendly to them :)

Great writing! You know how to keep the reader hooked up.

Thank you for sharing and congratulations on your curie vote :)