As we say in my country friend, I take off my hat, your story is far from being a story of beginners, you have wood for this type of writing, let me tell you that its story caught my attention from start to finish and I imagined every event of anguish of this boy of only 14 years.
I liked the part where the child fights, runs and pursues his dream of saving his life overcoming obstacles, he was strong and could continue to escape the monster that harassed him on his way, this part of the story is motivating and teaches us that we should not fear that we have to exhaust all our strength and continue fighting for our welfare.
I hope to read the next episode when the child faces his enemy in a battle of titans and the end will be suspended that each of us in the comments can give the last lines, it would be very interesting to participate at the end of the story
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