well actually it is well known now Hive account@lval115 - because of MK Ultra Mind Control techniques through Operation Paper Clip (from the Nazi Scientists that were brought over to the US after WWII) - the CIA has been purposely creating all Hollywood stars to have MPD, as well as Kathy O'brien - http://trance-formation.com/ - Brice Taylor, and all the many many victims of Satanic Ritual Abuse now coming to the surface ... You should look into it if you are interested in the subject matter. Katie Perry that star collapsed on stage during her show due to her MK Ultra alter's coinciding - Madonna, Brittainy Spears, Christina Agulera, Beyonce, Lady Gaga - ALL the stars who are successful have been created to have this disorder now... so that they can be controlled by their "owners" to do things that they would never do themselves - you should look into it - that's why you have to do more work these days than you might have had to do in the old days in story writing. The internet has brought information to everyone's disposal so everyone knows everything. You might start with sticking to your own personal experience just to develop a style you like - I would not have attempted what you did here - My story is non-fiction - it actually happened and so I was just recollecting it -