Thanks for the review! To be honest this was why I was putting my stories here. I used to trip around Urbis back when that site was a thing, and users would critique the works of other users, and in my experience it led to everyone getting better. I appreciate the critical eye this review took, and I'm going to take its criticisms into account in my future works. I might not be on the level of Robert E. Howard yet, but give me a little bit and we'll see.

It honestly means a lot that you took the time to read and critically evaluate my story, and I'll endeavor to do better next time. The story I'm currently publishing is a bit of an old one, written last year, but it's got some stuff following it, and I intend to expand on the universe created in Fire quite a bit in the future. I really should've taken the Orcs maintaining vehicles but not having access to modern weapons into account, and I'll rectify that in future stories. I might not be able to think of everything, I certainly didn't with this story, but I can always get better, and your review legitimately helped with that.

Thanks again for the review, and if you're interested in joining the PulpRev Discord server just let me know and I'll shoot you a link. I also hope you enjoy the other stories I'm going to be putting out on this platform!