Thank you.

Your notes are really welcome, the ambiguity that you pick up is rather suitable, I think more will be explained as I post the next few parts. For now, though, I did want to keep it subtle and ambiguous... I think, for now, a bit of confusion is good. I was trying to keep it rooted in the senses, so I'm glad you found it full of imagery (though curiously, no direct description of sight at all, I wonder why... ;P)

I haven't posted anything in a full two months now, let alone been on Steemit. I was down a deep well of depression, slowly pulling myself up now by the fingernails, so I'm glad that the first interaction I've received is from you, a hero of work-ethic. I hope you're doing well :)