In the following sentence...
After years she had gained enough success to be able to tour the world and was making enough money by putting out album after album of critically acclaimed punk rock, but she always felt sad. Numb. Cold.
I have no problem with “she always felt sad. Numb. Cold.” However, I am really curious about the rest of it. Success doesn’t come just because some “years passed.” There’s go to be something else that triggered success and that something else, the most important and the most interesting part is missing in this narrative. Instead, it is concentrated on some tangential problem.
RE: Alicia (A Trans Short Story)