This is pretty intriguing--you were definitely right when you said your readers will be enticed to read further. I followed you just so I could!

I'm interested in where you are going with this because your human character almost seems more like the alien with his/her blunt analysis of how humans work whereas the alien seems more like a human who hasn't been enlightened yet. Very interesting, especially if this is all a dream!

As for the writing, the grammar and sentence structure needs some work. But otherwise I think this is a great start! :) Happy writing! Can't wait to read more!