Hey Hive account@alunaa64,

I like the article you wrote, but one thing you could work on is your sentence structuring and putting things in your own words... Something you wrote:

People interacting in these worlds, will be able to take control of assets and properties at the same time share the power gain that implementers have developed.

This is kinda vague for anyone not familiar to the project. If you send that article to a random person who hasn't heard about XAYA yet, no matter how well they speak English, it'll be hard for them to understand that.

That also has to do with the fact that it's not a well-structured sentence. It really makes no sense... Do you mean that the "assets and properties" share the power gain? What power gain? Do you mean an improvement? That's very well possible and it's nice for people who like to confirm their knowledge of the subject, but for new people, this is simply unreadable. For more experienced people, it's also still a puzzle.

I would recommend you to work on your sentence-structuring. I have been following & supporting XAYA for a while, but this post is just one big puzzle to me.

Please do not interpret this as offensive or anything of that kind, as it's just well-intended feedback.