The poem goes just like music; the quatrains, rhyme scheme and rhythm. It was lovely when you said "the sun misses the moon.." Have you considered taking your diction deeper; while still threading

Nice poetry. And what about using more figurative expressions? Trust me, they make write-ups spicy.

What a benevolent way of looking out for newbies through knowledge dispensation! Thanks.

So peeing while showering saves water and cleaning up. Amazing. I never figured it like that.

It's an invention. It would have been more enlightening if the video had a voice telling us the capacity of the car.

It's innovative but the voicing is too mechanical