Sorry I just saw this! That was actually a really cool story. It packed a lot of creepiness and social commentary into just a few pages. Thanks for thinking to send it to me and for the kind words! I'll

Some of these short films you're posting are absolutely wild! Keep em coming. I've never really watched many short films but now you've got me hooked

Voted for "yes absolutely." Curie has single-handedly gotten me re-engaged with the steemit platform. I had all but given up until i realized there were some people who might read my posts and,

Thanks Michaias! That means a lot to me, and I love that you're getting a lot out of the story. Part 3 is gonna be a little ways off, but I'll put everything I've got into it and look forward to having

Thanks for reading Olivia! Part one and two are certainly very different, but I appreciate you for sticking with it!

Thank you to whoever nominated me!

This is a dope story! I just read from part 1 til here in one go, and you kept me interested the whole way. I must say my favorite part so far was the beginning. The description of the grandfather's story

Thank you for reading and for the kind comment.. I can think of no higher praise than "fascinating and disturbing," so you clearly know how to flatter me lol. Part two is coming up shortly!

Thank you! Next part coming soon!

Thank you! I appreciate the Black Mirror comparison, as that's really my favorite type of sci-fi. I've had this story on the back burner for a long time, having written a different story that involved

Thanks michaias! I'm glad you're enjoying it, though I must admit I'm getting a little stuck with the writing. I've got half of the next chapter done, but for the life of me I can't figure out the way

Thanks for commenting Lori! I appreciate the tip on the formatting.. I've been trying both ways and couldn't decide which way I liked better. Nobody had commented with an opinion one way or the other,

Thank you @cicisaja, I'm glad you made the effort to read it... I know my posts are really long. And thank you for mentioning that @audreybits gave me a shout out-- I didn't know until I saw your comment!

Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you're liking it! Also I just saw that you gave me a shout out on your pay it forward post.. you're the best!

Thank you @audreybits for the love! Super nice of you to give me a shout out. You da bomb

I'm glad you liked it! I've always been a little hesitant to write about love/ relationships/ romantic feelings, etc, so I'm glad that it hasn't come off too corny lol. That being said.. I'm not so sure

I'm glad you're enjoying it! The sci-fi element is definitely going to build as the story goes along and the "Mind Leap" company comes front and center. Thanks for reading and for commenting!

Thank you michaias! That's a very fair criticism, and you're definitely right that we're giving a heavy dose of Theo's insecurities without much of an idea what Kathy's might be. Thank you for reading,

Thank you to whoever in the Curie community nominated me... you guys are the best!

Bienvenidos Alicia! I enjoyed your post, and I'm looking forward to reading more of them... Glad to have you with us!