Recommendations: BTW, I'm not a poetry person either, but these are my favorites. Shane Koyczan — "The Crickets Have Arthritis," "Heaven, or Whatever," "Instructions for a Bad

This felt like the sweet-sadness of a Ray Bradbury story, and I love that. Keep up the great work! I'm interested in checking out Reversed Black Maria. I appreciate that you were able to pique my interest

Often times the worst mistakes in writing are missed opportunities. There's so much you can do with dialogue, and it's a shame to see the writer resort to literally describing things instead of using the