Okay, I'm dying. That was great. I agree with @cheah, in that the sentences were a little run-on at times. However, the core concepts were fantastic.

I keep hearing about him. I'm going to have to track down his work...once I get through my backlog, that is.

That's exactly it. You can't get better if you don't practice, after all.

It seems obvious when you read it, but if it really were that obvious it wouldn't need to be said, would it? I personally was sitting on that wall for a while. Then I realized at some point that I was

That was fun, no lie. I'm clearly going to have to work these muscles harder to get to the consistency demanded by pulp speed, but this was exactly the motivation I needed.

Way to leave me hanging.

I'm noticing a trend here, which is that I upvote first and read second. I haven't regretted that order of operation yet. Your quality is very consistent. Hat off to you, sir.

Thank you! I'm happy it's grabbed your interest.

I'm beyond pleased that you enjoyed it!

I got you, bro!

I am well acquainted with the pitfalls of image usage online, but my brain hadn't connected this with the fact that there's an irrevocability to things here. That could get messy really quickly, eh?

So, two points. First, I definitely want more of this. Second, I just realized that you've been using the word C. S. Lewis invented in Out of the Silent Planet for describing reasoning beings. Was that

I'll readily admit that I'm still coming to grips with how this all works. But I'm picking up what you're putting down and I have to say I'm not deeply heartened. Hopefully the community is as open as

I've thought about alt history before...and I have to say that I think that would fall outside my current worldbuilding.

See this all makes utter and complete sense to me. I would add as a reason that it let's me screw around with genre barriers. As an example, I have what I'm planning to do for the impending

Okay, now I really want to see where this goes. I await with as much patience as I can muster.

Truth be told, I don't mind the 1500-word range. Maybe I would if everyone I followed wrote that length, but I appreciate a mix.

I'll level with you...the net result of reading Blue's story is that I really want to know more about this world, and I'm not picky. Begin and the beginning, maybe? (I'm assuming that Kazimir's story comes

More indeed. There seems to me to be things left to say here.

Funny enough, you are who I was talking about before. :)