Yeah! Stompy time!

Overcrowding is never an issue, at least.

Good catch. It was written with a more YA kind of feel.

We have monstergirl. Repeat: Monstergirl confirmed.

That floating volleyball is tailor made to generate feels in part 3, if I know my Dent Formula. Solid start. Great character introductions, and a spare but useful bit of worldbuilding around Jarik. Digging

But killing them all is the best way to make sure it stays a one-shot

Absolutely!

Glad you liked it. It was a re-work of something I wrote a long time ago. There's definitely more of that setting on the way.

Press F for Squad Seven. Good stuff. Wall-to-wall well-described action.

Great post. You raised some excellent points regarding antiheroes.

Best of luck and godspeed

Thanks! I appreciate the feedback. As for the arm, well...that'll be explored a little later on.

Really digging the atmosphere in this one.